It was an ordinary train ride
You, me, Leita, and Dan
We didn’t mean to get separated.
We didn’t mean anything
in those days. We were
in college. It seemed
like we were rebels. Our parents
ate cabbage; our parents. Gosh,
we thought, what happened to them?
We simply got on a train. We didn’t
tell them. We were skipping school,
old enough to be our own.
I have to tell them, you loved me.
Dan loved Leita. I loved you.
We all kind of loved.
It was supposed to be
a simple day in New York.
It was supposed to be
A simple day in New York.
You don’t want me to bring
our life after this back
to this. Moment. There
is nothing like an almost.
In the aftermath, when the train
stopped, when no one was
ever the same again; i mean
the conductor said – Do you remember
what the conductor said?
i remember : it was a morning train
i remember : the birds flying at the windows
i remember : You shrouding me across
the platform.
i had you. You had me.
Dan had Leita, Leita had Dan.
We were never the same.
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Note: I remember reading this poem last year on September 12. My good friend Michelle sent it to me, saying, “You HAVE to read this.” Well, I did: read it and have to. And it has haunted me every day since, much like that tragic day fifteen years ago.
Gratitude to Eric Robert Nolan (friend of the poet) who originally shared this piece on his blog.
Reblogged this on Eric Robert Nolan, Author.
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Wow. Michelle was right.
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I’m so glad you found this again. Thank you ❤️❤️
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The poem I can’t forget is “Photograph from September 11” by Clare Cavanagh.
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Just read it. I can see why you can’t forget it. That imagery. Just like a photograph burned into my mind. I’ll paste it below.
One thing though, looks like Cavanagh translated the piece from Wisława Szymborska.
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Yes! I got the translator and author backwards.
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Poem copied from Poetry Foundation.org
https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poems-and-poets/poems/detail/48799
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Photograph from September 11
By Wisława Szymborska
Translated by Clare Cavanagh
They jumped from the burning floors—
one, two, a few more,
higher, lower.
The photograph halted them in life,
and now keeps them
above the earth toward the earth.
Each is still complete,
with a particular face
and blood well hidden.
There’s enough time
for hair to come loose,
for keys and coins
to fall from pockets.
They’re still within the air’s reach,
within the compass of places
that have just now opened.
I can do only two things for them—
describe this flight
and not add a last line.
Wisława Szymborska, “Photograph from September 11” from Monologue of a Dog. Copyright © 2005 by Wisława Szymborska. Reprinted with permission of Harcourt, Inc.
Source: Monologue of a Dog (Houghton Mifflin Harcourt, 2005)
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Another powerful one for today. Spacing and breaks did not copy well, see original post at Rattle for formatting.
From Rattle Magazine:
http://www.rattle.com/why-i-dont-write-poems-about-911-by-vicki-iorio/
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Vicki Iorio
WHY I DON’T WRITE POEMS ABOUT 9/11
Because I have privacy issues
Because Don DeLillo wrote Falling Man
Because of people
falling
Because I have survivor’s guilt
Because my ex-husband’s new wife’s boss died in one of the towers
Because I felt a tinge of pleasure and wished it had been the new wife
Because of Extremely Loud and Incredibly Close—what is there left to say?
Because my daughter was thirteen when the world spun out of her control
Because the night of that day we heard airplanes in the sky when there were no planes flying
Because my daughter would not leave her bedroom
Because she stopped going to school
Because I worked for the Department of Defense
Because we were herded into the black ops room
Because my Commander was crying
Because driving home on the parkway, the overhead message, Manhattan is Closed, came at me like a head on collision
Because of what it has become
Because of what I have become
Because my mother lived through Pearl Harbor
Because her brothers came home from that war old men
Because JFK was shot
Because Viet Nam was my TV dinner
Because ringing a bell and calling out names like a somber graduation doesn’t cut it
Because the Freedom Tower is America giving the bird to the birds
Because we all wear ribbons or tiny rhinestone flags
Because it’s OK to bless America
Because we all need a blessing
Because there were heroes that day
Because God wasn’t one of them
Because of the last phone calls
Because of the missing
Because on windy days I open my mouth and swallow smoke and ash
—Poets Respond
September 11, 2016
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Vicki Iorio: “This Sunday is 9/11. I thought I never would write about the event, but I am giving a poetry reading this Sunday and I wanted to acknowledge the sadness.”
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